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英語寫作指導(dǎo)1

　　盜版產(chǎn)品(safeguard intellectual property，CD, videos, CD-ROMs, counterfeit trademarks)

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　　In March, China and the United States averted a trade war when they reached an agreement to safeguard U.S. intellectual property right

英語寫作指導(dǎo)2

　　記敘文是記人敘事的文章，它主要是用于說明事件的時間、背景、起因、過程及結(jié)果，即我們通常所說的五個" W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一個" H "( how )。記敘文的重點在于"述說"和"描寫"，因此一篇好的記敘文要敘述條理清楚，描寫生動形象。下面就談?wù)動⒄Z記敘文的特點和寫好記敘文的基本要領(lǐng)。

　　一、記敘文的特點

　　1. 敘述的人稱

　　英語的記敘文一般是以第一或第三人稱的角度來敘述的。用第一稱表示的是由敘述者親眼所見、親耳所聞的經(jīng)歷。它的優(yōu)點在于能把故事的情節(jié)通過"我"來傳達給讀者，使人讀后感到真實可信，如身臨其境。如：

　　The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.

　　用第三人稱敘述，優(yōu)點在于敘述者不受"我"活動范圍以內(nèi)的人和事物的限制，而是通過作者與讀者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情節(jié)展現(xiàn)在讀者面前，文章的客觀性很強。如：

　　Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.

　　2. 動詞的時態(tài)

　　在記敘文中，記和敘都離不開動詞。所以動詞出現(xiàn)率最高，且富于變化。記敘文中用得最多的是動詞的過去的，這是英語記敘文區(qū)別于漢語記敘文的關(guān)鍵之處。英語寫作的優(yōu)美之處就在于這些動詞時態(tài)的變化，正是這一點才使得所記、所敘有鮮活的動態(tài)感、鮮明的層次感和立體感。

　　3. 敘述的順序

　　記敘一件事要有一定的順序。無論是順敘、倒敘、插敘還是補敘，都要讓讀者能弄清事情的'來龍去脈。順敘最容易操作，較容易給讀者提供有關(guān)事情的空間和時間線索。但這種方法也容易使文章顯得平鋪直敘，讀起來平淡乏味。倒敘、插敘、補敘等敘述方法能有效地提高文章的結(jié)構(gòu)效果，讓所敘之事跌宕起伏，使讀者在閱讀時思維產(chǎn)生較大的跳躍，從而為文章所吸引，深入其中。但這些方法如果使用不當(dāng)，則容易弄巧成拙，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)散亂，頭緒不清，讓讀者不知所云。

　　4. 敘述的過渡

　　過渡在上下文中起著承上啟下、融會貫通的作用。過渡往往用在地點轉(zhuǎn)移或時間、事件轉(zhuǎn)換以及由概括說明到具體敘述時。如：

　　In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.

　　The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.

　　What a moving and unforgettable scene!

　　5. 敘述與對話

　　引用故事情節(jié)中主要人物的對話是記敘文提高表現(xiàn)力的一種好方法。適當(dāng)?shù)赜弥苯右Z代替間接的主觀敘述，可以客觀生動地反映人物的性格、品質(zhì)和心理狀態(tài)，使記敘生動、有趣，使文章內(nèi)容更加充實、具體。試比較下面兩段的敘述效果：

　　I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.

　　這本來應(yīng)是一段故事性很強的文字，但經(jīng)作者這么一寫，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是敘述模式，沒有人物語言，把"懸念"給沖淡了�？勺魅缦抡{(diào)整：

　　I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "It's you." I said, quite released.

　　二、寫好記敘文的基本要領(lǐng)

　　1. 頭緒分明，脈絡(luò)清楚

　　寫好記敘文，首先要頭緒分明，脈絡(luò)清楚，明確文章要求寫什么。要對所寫的事件或人物進行分析，弄清事件發(fā)生、發(fā)展一直到結(jié)束的整個過程，然后再收集選取素材。這些素材都應(yīng)該跟上述五個" W "和一個" H "有關(guān)。盡管不是每篇記敘文里都必須包括這些" W "和" H "，但動筆之前，圍繞五個" W "和" H "進行構(gòu)思是必不可少的。

　　2. 突出中心，詳略得當(dāng)

　　在文章的框架確定后，對支持故事的素材的選取是很關(guān)鍵的。選材要注意取舍，應(yīng)該從表現(xiàn)文章主題的需要出發(fā)，分清主次，定好詳略。要突出重點，詳寫細述那些能表現(xiàn)文章主題的重要情節(jié)，略寫粗述那么非關(guān)鍵的次要情節(jié)。面面俱到反而使情節(jié)羅列化，使人不得要領(lǐng)。這一點是寫好記敘文要解決的一個基本問題，也需要一定的技巧。如：

　　One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.

　　When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破壞外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.

　　I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors - they are hungry also!"

　　3. 用活語言，準(zhǔn)確生動

　　記敘文要用具體的事件和生動的語言對人、事、物加以敘述。一篇好的記敘文的語言既要準(zhǔn)確、生動，又要表現(xiàn)力強，這樣才能把人、事描寫得具體生動，其可讀性才強。試比較下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

　　原文：

　　One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang e back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it. She served them with tea but they left.

　　修改后：

　　The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.

　　"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.

　　"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.

　　"Don't worry, we'll send you home."

　　And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.

　　When the worried mother saw her son e back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.

英語寫作指導(dǎo)3

　　句子是表達一個完整意思的最小當(dāng)位，所以造句能力在英文寫作中是非常重要的。好的英語句子能夠生動，形象，準(zhǔn)確的`表達內(nèi)容。所以要想寫出漂亮的書面表達，必須從寫好句子開始。

　　英語基本句型及造句:

　　1.主語+謂語+狀語(介詞,名詞短語或從句)

　　The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west.

　　We get up early every morning.

　　The meeting lasted 2 hours.

　　2.主語+不及物動詞+副詞

　　This kind of wine drinks well and sells well.

　　The suit wears well.

　　Glass breaks easily.

　　3.主語+謂語+介詞+賓語

　　We all agreed on the terms.

　　He hates to argue with his wife about such small matters.

　　All these things are to be answered for.

　　4.主語+系動詞+形容詞

　　Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth.

　　He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed.

　　Your explanation sounds reasonable.

　　5.主語+謂語+直接賓語

　　I want your promise.

　　Have your fixed my watch?

　　This factory produces 1000 cars a week.

　　6.主語+謂語+間接賓語+直接賓語

　　He paid me a visit yesterday.

　　He owed me 50 yuan.

　　He wrote his family a letter yesterday.

　　7.主語+謂語+賓語+賓補(to do)

　　I will get someone to repair the recorder for you.

　　I didn’t mean to hurt you.

　　He in vited me to teach at a well-known university.

　　8.主語+謂語+賓語+賓補(do)

　　I often hear her sing the song.

　　The boss made workers work 15 hours a day.

　　Don’t forget to have him come.

　　10.主語+謂語+現(xiàn)在分詞

　　I heard her singing in the next room.

　　We could feel our heats beating fast.

　　Did you observe the birds flying around the trees?

　　11.主語+謂語+過去分詞

　　I must have my watch repaired.

　　We must get he task finished on time.

　　Speak louder to make yourself understood by everybody.

　　12.主語+謂語+賓語(動名詞)

　　I suggested putting off the meeting.

　　They all avoided mentioning the matter.

　　We can’t help laughing at the news.

　　13.主語+謂語+賓語(不定式)

　　I can’t afford to buy such a large house.

　　Don’t pretend to know what you don’t.

　　He feared to speak in her presence.

　　14.主語+謂語+賓語(名詞/代詞)+介詞+賓語

　　Nothing can prevent us from going forward.

　　Thank you for your help.

　　He demanded an answer from me.

　　練習(xí)寫好句子的方法

　　1.合并句子

　　It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers.

　　Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden.

　　A girl was crossing a road. Th e girl was pretty. The road was wide.

　　A pretty girl was crossing a wide road.

　　2.改寫句子

　　1) Mr. Green is a tall man, who wears a pair of thick glasses. (改成介詞短語做伴隨狀語)

　　1) The book cost me 300 yuan.

　　Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses.

　　2) The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (使用so…that…結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句子)

　　The ice on the lake is so thin that we can’t skate on it.

　　3.一句多譯

　　這本書花了我300元。

　　I spent 300 yuan on the book.

　　I paid 300 yuan for the book.

　　The price of the book is 300 yuan.

　　It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book.

　　我不懂什么英語，李明也不懂。

　　I don’t know any English, nor does Li Ming.

　　I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming.

　　I hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming.

　　I hardly know any English, no more doe s Li Ming.

　　I hardly know any English, so it is with Li Ming.

　　I know no more English than Li Ming does.

　　I know as little English as Li Ming does.

　　一到家，我就把所見到的一切都記了下來。

　　On/Upon arriving home, I wrote down everything I had seen.

　　As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.

　　The moment I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.

　　The instant I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.

　　No sooner had I arrived home than I wrote down everything I had seen.

　　昨天下午他才來。

　　He came here yesterday afternoon.

　　He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon.

　　Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.

　　It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here.

　　It was n ot until yesterday afternoon that he came here.

英語寫作指導(dǎo)4

　　New Insurance Chief at Union Bank

　　Union Bank of California, N.A. (San Francisco) has named Michael A. Janes as chief executive officer of its insurance subsidiary, UnionBanc Insurance Services Inc., one of the 30 largest insurance agencies in the United States. Janes joins the agency from Hilb, Rogal & Hobbs Co. where he was regional director of its West Coast operations.

　　UnionBanc Insurance Services Inc. recently announced the consolidation of its insurance operation under the UnionBanc Insurance Services umbrella. The new agency will be co-branded with the three original agencies of Armstong/Robitaille Business and Insurance Services, John Burnham Insurance, and Tanner Insurance Brokers.

　　The insurance operation currently has nine offices located in San Diego, Irvine, Fullerton, Glendale, Pleasanton, San Rafael, Stockton, Sacramento—all in California——and in Portland, Oregon. Annual revenue exceeds $80 million and the company employs 415 insurance professionals. The agency has focused on selling commercial property and casualty insurance but recently announced that it plans to expand its personal insurance offerings. The bank also intends to begin distributing life insurance in-house soon (rather than through external wholesalers).

　　Union Bank of California is a subsidiary of UnionBanCal Corporation. UnionBanCal (assets $49.4 billion) was cited as a 'Top 10' institution in the 20xx Edition of Who's Who in Bank Insurance.

英語寫作指導(dǎo)5

　　結(jié)構(gòu)：中考最流行的結(jié)構(gòu)就是三段式，深受各地區(qū)中考英語寫作閱卷老師的喜愛。為什么？因為這種結(jié)構(gòu)十分清晰。“觀點——要點——總結(jié)”讓人一目了然。三段式的第一段：簡單明了，開門見山，不超過2句話，如，我們想表達小強很強壯，第一段直接說 XQ is extremely strong. 觀點明確，這一句足矣。第二段：分2-3點說為什么他強壯。1. 每天吃10頓飯，He has ten meals everyday! 詳舉吃的是什么。2. 每天運動2小時，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 詳舉做了什么運動。第三段：經(jīng)過第二段的論證，可以得出結(jié)論。但請注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升華。也可以提出希望和建議等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!

　　要點：實際上中考英語寫作就等于兩個字，翻譯！因為中考英語寫作一般會給出幾個要點，要求必須在文章中有所體現(xiàn)。文章寫的再好，只要缺少要點就會扣分。所以要點，也就是文章的第二段內(nèi)容，要做到全，圍繞中心。

　　邏輯：這里的'邏輯實際指的就是邏輯詞。最常用的就是表示遞進的，轉(zhuǎn)折的，總結(jié)的邏輯詞等。遞進：除了first, second, third, finally 等還可以使用高級點的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示總結(jié)的）。轉(zhuǎn)折：but, yet, however等。真正有經(jīng)驗的閱卷老師會很注意這些邏輯連接詞，因為這些詞體現(xiàn)了這個文章的思路。

　　語法：其他幾點都不是硬性的要求，不那樣做不能說是錯，只能說是不好，但是語法卻是硬性的。如，單詞的使用，時態(tài)等。

　　亮點：當(dāng)我們將前八個字都做得很完美的時候也只能得到一個二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后兩個字，亮點至關(guān)重要。大家設(shè)想如果我們是閱卷老師。有兩篇寫人美麗的作文擺在我們面前，都是結(jié)構(gòu)清晰的三段式，要點都很全，都用了一些邏輯詞，都沒有語法錯誤，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇卻用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我堅信正常人都會給B篇高分的。這些高級一點的詞匯，詞組，句型便是我們得到一等文的最有力的絕招。所以，以后寫英語作文要養(yǎng)成一般詞匯限量用的好習(xí)慣。

　　只要把這十個字都搞定了，那么中考英語作文就一定能搞定！

　　評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

　　1. 內(nèi)容完整，語句流暢，無語法錯誤，書寫規(guī)范，給12-15分；

　　2. 內(nèi)容較完整，語句較流暢，基本無語法錯誤，書寫較規(guī)范，給9-11分；

　　3. 內(nèi)容不完整，語句欠流暢，語法錯誤較多，書寫較規(guī)范，給5-8分；

　　4. 只寫出個別要點，語法錯誤較多，書寫欠規(guī)范，只有個別句子可讀或不知所云，給0-3分。

英語寫作指導(dǎo)6

　　Tom 正和他的一個朋友Jim 談?wù)撍诘膶W(xué)校。Tom 很不喜歡這所學(xué)校，原因是這所學(xué)校的.規(guī)章制度太多。

　　要點：(1)保持安靜(2)不準(zhǔn)吃零食(3)不準(zhǔn)亂扔垃圾(4)不準(zhǔn)打鬧(5)按時上課(6)做好課前準(zhǔn)備

　　【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】

　　Tom is talking about his school with his friend Jim. Tom tells Jim he doesn’t like this school very much, because there are too many school rules for us.

　　1. Keep quiet in the classroom ,please.

　　2. Don’t eat snacks in the classroom ,or it will make our classroom dirty.

　　3. Don’t throw around.

　　4. Don’t fight and chase after each other in the classroom. Of course, you can’t make any noise.

　　5. Please arrive at the class on time. Don’t be late, or our teachers will be unhappy.

　　6. Get ready before the class. Don’t look for anything after the class begins.

　　If we break any one of them, we will be punished.

　　Unit5 Why do you like pandas?

　　【寫作話題】本單元以動物話題，描述自己喜歡的動物及原因。

　　【寫作題目】根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容，以A Trip to the Zoo寫一篇60詞左右的短文介紹一下動物園新來的兩只動物。

英語寫作指導(dǎo)7

　　在大學(xué)英語六級寫作過程中，一個好的開頭猶如畫龍點睛，點亮了整篇文章得到好的印象分。

　　(1) 主題句法：The appeal of advertising to buying motives can have both negative and positive effects.

　　The biggest safety threat facing airlines today may not be a terrorist with a gun, but the man with the portable computer in business class.

　　Believe it or not, optical illusion (錯覺) can cut highway crashes.

　　(2) 問題法：Do you know how many people die from traffic accidents every 23 minutes?

　　Why does cream go bad faster than butter?

　　(3) 對比法：Some pessimistic experts feel that the automobile is bound to fall into disuse. They see a day in the not-too-distant future when all autos will be abandoned and allowed to rust. Other authorities, however, think the auto is here to stay. They hold that the car will remain a leading means of urban travel in the foreseeable future.

　　(4) 數(shù)據(jù)法：According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.

　　Honesty:根據(jù)最近的一項統(tǒng)計調(diào)查顯示，大學(xué)生向老師請假的理由當(dāng)中78%都是假的。

　　Living off Campus:根據(jù)最近的一項統(tǒng)計調(diào)查顯示，35%的學(xué)生不住宿舍，而是在學(xué)校外面租房子住。

　　Youth:根據(jù)最近的一項統(tǒng)計調(diào)查顯示，在某個大學(xué)，學(xué)生的'課余時間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。

　　The latest statistics show that …

　　(5) 故事法：Six o'clock yesterday (June 20th, Friday) afternoon when I was walking along the riverbank of our school, an unbelievable scene caught my eyes.

　　(6) 引語法：A proverb says, "You are only young once."（適用于記住的名言）

　　It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（自編名言）

英語寫作指導(dǎo)8

　　一、常規(guī)開頭句型

　　1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言

　　2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻，…

　　3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地說……

　　4.As the proverb says，正如諺語所說的，

　　5.It has to be noticed that… 它必須注意到，…

　　6.It's generally recognized that… 它普遍認為…

　　7.It's likely that … 這可能是因為…

　　8.It's hardly that… 這是很難的……

　　9.It's hardly too much to say that… 它幾乎沒有太多的說…

　　10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特別注意的是

　　11.There's no denying the fact that…毫無疑問，無可否認

　　12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 沒有什么比這更重要的'是…

　　13.what's far more important is that… 更重要的是…

　　二、四級引出開頭

　　1：It is well-known to us that……(我們都知道……)==As far as my knowledge is concerned, …( 就我所知…)

　　2：Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……(最近……問題引起了關(guān)注)

　　3：Nowadays(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.(現(xiàn)今，人口過剩已成為我們不得不面對的問題)

　　4：Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.(互聯(lián)網(wǎng)已在我們的生活扮演著越來越重要的角色，它給我們帶來了許多好處但也產(chǎn)生了一些嚴重的問題)

　　5：With the rapid development of science and technology，more and more people believe that……(隨著科技的迅速發(fā)展，越來越多的人認為……)

　　6：It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……(人們一般認為……)

　　7：A lot of people seem to think that……(很多人似乎認為……)

　　8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子(全世界都知道...)

　　三、高考英語引出開頭

　　Recently, the problem of … has aroused people's concern. 最近,……問題已引起人們的關(guān)注.

　　The Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

　　互聯(lián)網(wǎng)已在我們的生活中扮演著越來越重要的角色.它給我們帶來了許多好處,但也產(chǎn)生了一些嚴重的問題.

　　Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.

　　如今,(人口過剩)已成為我們不得不面對的問題了.

　　It is commonly believed that … / It is a common belief that … 人們一般認為……

　　Many people insist that … 很多人堅持認為……

　　With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…

　　隨著科技的發(fā)展,越來越多的人認為……

　　A lot of people seem to think that … 很多人似乎認為……

英語寫作指導(dǎo)9

　　話題體裁：

　　日�；顒用枋龀Ｓ糜洈⑽膩碛浭霭l(fā)生在日常生活中的一些小故事。根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容寫日記是最常見的一種形式，有時該類話題的寫作也常設(shè)計成議論文，討論某些日常活動的利弊、影響以及對此活動的建議等。

　　話題內(nèi)容：

　　該話題屬于就日常行為和活動進行介紹、描述或評論。故事內(nèi)容常與中學(xué)生的日常生活和學(xué)習(xí)息息相關(guān)，主要有：日常活動的準(zhǔn)備過程，如上學(xué)、運動、作息等；日常生活中的某些活動，如打掃衛(wèi)生、做飯、洗衣，甚至包括洗刷、洗浴等個人衛(wèi)生等細節(jié)描述；用餐活動，如一日三餐，尤其是早餐、野餐以及零食等的討論；業(yè)余時間活動描述，除家庭作業(yè)外，還有一些娛樂活動，如看電視、散步、參觀旅游、拜親訪友等活動的描述和討論。寫作過程中除了要記述故事的發(fā)生、發(fā)展、高潮和結(jié)局外，還要有自己的心理活動的描述，表達自己的觀點，有時還要求提出一些科學(xué)合理的建議。

　　話題詞匯：

　　1、該話題寫作一般按事情發(fā)生的先后順序記述故事，所以有時需要借助一些表示先后

　　順序的詞語，如：at first（起先），then（接著），later on（以后），afterwards（后來），soon（不久），finally（最后），at last（終于）等。

　　2、日記寫作中常有一些有關(guān)天氣的英文表達，比較復(fù)雜的有fine（晴朗），hot（熱），pretty

　　warm（相當(dāng)暖和），shower（陣雨），thundering（雷雨），dense fog（濃霧），haily（冰雹），a little rain，later cloudy（小雨轉(zhuǎn)多云）等。

　　3、文章常用一些總結(jié)性的詞語，如on the whole總體上看；in a word總而言之等。

　　話題句型：

　　1、多用主系表結(jié)構(gòu)的句型，注意系動詞的多樣性，如：be，feel，grow，turn等。

　　2、多用There be句型，注意結(jié)合分詞作定語的結(jié)構(gòu)，如：There is a man standing under thetree。=There stands a man under the tree。

　　3、多用不定式短語作目的狀語（處在句首或句末）、結(jié)果狀語（處在句尾）等，如：To improvemy spoken English，I decided to attend then English corner to be held on the square every Friday evening。

　　4、多用分詞短語作時間、條件、原因狀語等，如：On hearing the cried for help，I run to the river side and found that a boy was struggling in the water。

　　5、多用熟練的復(fù)句結(jié)構(gòu)：because；where；when等引導(dǎo)的原因、時間、地點等狀語從句；which（who）引導(dǎo)的'定語從句；so that…，so…that…引導(dǎo)的目的、結(jié)果狀語從句；以及I’m sure that…，I think that…這類賓語從句等。

　　6、文章結(jié)尾，常用Though we feel a little tired，we feel very happy。等作為簡單的總結(jié)。

　　一試身手：

　　現(xiàn)在幾乎家家戶戶都有電視機，看電視成了人們的業(yè)余活動。請根據(jù)廈門的提示內(nèi)容寫一篇120詞的短文，根據(jù)提示發(fā)表自己的觀點。

　　1、電視的作用：娛樂消遣、掌握生活常識、了解知識、開闊眼界、活躍思維等

　　2、電視的壞處：長時間看電視會傷害人的身體，影響青少年的視力，影響人們的正常工作

　　和學(xué)習(xí)。

英語寫作指導(dǎo)10

　　第1，審題要充分。

　　我所教的學(xué)生中在寫英語作文時，普遍存在這樣一個情況：看完作文題，就開始寫，想到哪寫到哪，只要把字數(shù)湊夠了就停筆了。這樣寫出來的文章，看起來就像在記流水帳，沒有任何邏輯，雜亂無章，毫無條理，同時容易出現(xiàn)用錯時態(tài)、用錯格式等的情況。試想，如果你是試卷的命題人，你出作文題的時候，肯定有出這道題的獨特的道理。所以仔細審題和構(gòu)思就成了寫作的第一步。審題的重點放在寫作體裁、格式、字數(shù)方面，確保第一遍審題就能保證得到基本分。同時還要文體和時態(tài)，因為不同的文體要求的寫作格式也是不同的，時態(tài)的要求也非常重要。

　　第2，提綱要詳細。

　　審?fù)觐}后一定要列提綱。很多學(xué)生認為，英語作文譯成中文，最多是小學(xué)二年級的語文作文水平，所以根本沒有必要列提綱。其實，這種想法是非常錯誤的，因為提綱不僅能使文章的.結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，還有很重要的一點：防止漏掉作文內(nèi)容。因為英語作文有一個很重要的要求：要點要全。如果你漏掉了需要寫的內(nèi)容，即使文章寫得再優(yōu)美，用詞再準(zhǔn)確，也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿，然后修改。這樣可以保證錯誤降低至最少或者沒有錯誤，同時也能保持卷面整潔。

　　第3，文化差異要注意

　　我們要時刻牢記一點，中英文表達方式有很大的差異，所以體現(xiàn)在作文表達上也常常會出現(xiàn)生硬的中國式作文表達，降低了我們的作文質(zhì)量。所以注重中英語言差異，并努力找到兩者之間的表達方式上的共通點，并且有意識的運用就能避免類似的問題。

　　第4，細節(jié)錯誤要摒棄。

　　很多孩子在寫作文時常常感覺寫得非常好，用上了幾個高級句型或者不錯的詞匯短語，以為可以得高分，但最終結(jié)果出來后卻與預(yù)想差距很大。主要的原因是很多細節(jié)沒有注意。比如第三人稱單數(shù)，名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)，大小寫，甚至標(biāo)點、書寫、段落安排等，這些細節(jié)問題也很重要。

　　最后：背誦閱讀優(yōu)秀的中學(xué)生的作文集

　　寫作很容易在短時間內(nèi)有大的飛躍，要做的就是積累一些經(jīng)典的句型、地道的表達方式�？梢员痴b閱讀優(yōu)秀的中學(xué)生的作文集，把精彩的段落和句子抄下來并仿寫，最后整理出幾十個最常用、最精彩的表達法，寫作文時有意識地想一想，總能用上幾個。

　　英語寫作5大要素

　　要點+結(jié)構(gòu)+邏輯+語法+亮點

　　結(jié)構(gòu)：中

　　考最流行的結(jié)構(gòu)就是三段式，深受各地區(qū)中考英語寫作閱卷老師的喜愛。為什么呢？因為這種結(jié)構(gòu)十分清晰�！坝^點——要點——總結(jié)”讓人一目了然。三段式的第

　　一段：簡單明了，開門見山，不超過2句話，如，我們想表達小強很強壯，第一段直接說XQ is extremely strong、

　　觀點明確，這一句足矣。

　　第二段：分2—3點說為什么他強壯。

　　1、每天吃10頓飯，He has ten meals everyday！詳舉吃的是什么。

　　2、每天運動2小時，He does exercise 2 hours a day！詳舉做了什么運動。

　　第三段：經(jīng)過第二段的論證，可以得出結(jié)論。但請注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升華。也可以提出希望和建議等。如，How strong and robust XQ is！I hope to be him one day！

英語寫作指導(dǎo)11

　　寫作技巧指導(dǎo)

　　1.發(fā)言稿是介紹性說明文，在語言使用一定要準(zhǔn)確簡潔，通俗易懂，層次清楚，條理分明。介紹說明事物的內(nèi)容關(guān)系要明確，要求邏輯性強。發(fā)言稿印版有開頭語，正文和結(jié)束語三部分組成。開頭語一般來說比較簡單，目的就是吸引聽眾或讀者的注意力。

　　發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾一般都有固定的的格式，如：

　　Dear friends,

　　I’m glad to introduce myself to you

　　.___________________________

　　That’s all. Thank you.

　　如果是熟悉的聽眾，頭尾可以活潑一些，靈活一些，如：

　　(1)Good morning,/Good afternoon,everyone…

　　That’s all. Thank you.

　　( 2 )Good evening!Ladies and gentlemen..

　　That’s all. Thank you.

　　2.正文是發(fā)言稿的主體，主要是提供論點和相關(guān)的論據(jù)等，論點要明確，論據(jù)要充分有力。發(fā)言稿的正文常見形式：

　　第一部分：開門見山提出本人要談的問題及對問題的看法;

　　第二部分：說明理由，常見的關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：First of all , Secondly, Finally等;

　　第三部分：照應(yīng)開頭，總結(jié)全文。最后可以做簡明扼要的總結(jié)，也可以談自己的希望或看法等。常見的句式有：In short, In a word…等。

　　3.發(fā)言稿的語句表達要直接面對聽眾，盡量不要用復(fù)雜啰嗦的句子，更不要采用深奧難懂的句子。話要說的'準(zhǔn)確易懂，最好用大眾語言。除了要求以簡單句為主的同時，可以適當(dāng)穿插一些復(fù)合句結(jié)構(gòu)。由于文章要求以簡單句為主，所以不要把文章寫成單句的羅列，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞承前啟后，可以使文章前后連貫，渾然一體。

　　發(fā)言稿的時態(tài)一般以現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。

　　常用句型

　　1.I’d like to tell you something about our school.

　　2.Let me give you a brief introduction about our school.

　　3.Please allow me to introduce the travel arrangements to you.

　　4.It’s my honor to say a few words to welcome you.

　　5.I am sure we will benefit a lot from the lecture.

　　6.Personally, I think it’s a good idea for us to have daily exercise.

　　7.In my opinion,…

　　8.Personally,…

　　9,In a word,…

　　10,However,…

　　萬能模板

　　everyone/ladies and gentlemen,…

　　It’s a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech. My name is…The topic of my speech is…

　　First, many people suggest that…Secondly,…Thirdly,…

　　What I want to stress is that…For one thing,…For another,…Besides,…In a word,…

　　Thank you for your listening.

　　引入寫作范例寫作指導(dǎo)

　　假定你校將舉行一個成人儀式，你將作為代表在儀式上發(fā)言。請你按以下內(nèi)容要點準(zhǔn)備一篇英文發(fā)言稿。

　　1.過去對成年的向往;

　　2.現(xiàn)在的感受和認識;

　　3.將來的目標(biāo)及措施。

　　參考詞匯：責(zé)任responsibility

　　注意：

　　1.詞數(shù)100左右;

　　2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫;

　　3.發(fā)言稿的開頭與結(jié)束語已為你寫好(不計入總詞數(shù))

　　1.本文要求寫一篇成人儀式上的英語發(fā)言稿。開頭和結(jié)尾均已給出;

　　2，對寫作內(nèi)容也有了明確的要求：過去對成年的向往、現(xiàn)在對已成年的的感受和認識、成年的我將來的目標(biāo)及措施;

　　3，注意時態(tài)的交替使用

　　參考范文

　　Good morning ,everyone!

　　The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts becoming a grow-up.’’

　　As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked. Now I’m a grow-up, but I find things do not go as I expected. Although I can enjoy more freedom, at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful. To reach the the goal, I must first try my best to pass the College Entrance Examination and enter a good universityt.

　　Thank you for listening.

　　重點短語

　　1.grow up長大

　　2.reach the goal實現(xiàn)目標(biāo)

　　3.try one’s best盡最大努力

　　基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練高考英語微信公眾號Englishtec.

　　在和諧社會里，在人與人之間的互幫互助已構(gòu)成我們生活中的組成部分。下周英國聯(lián)誼學(xué)校將來你校訪問，你校英語俱樂部將舉行一次以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful’’為主題的英語演講比賽。假如你是王志，準(zhǔn)備參加本次演講比賽，請你用英語寫一篇演講稿。

　　要點：

　　1.幫助同學(xué)----友誼;2.幫助老人----幸福;3.幫助病人----快樂;

　　4.幫助別人會......

　　注意：

　　1.詞數(shù)100左右;

　　2.文章開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù);

　　3.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱;

　　Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful

　　Hello, everyone. I’m Wang Zhi. It’s nice to speak about help here.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Thank you for your listening.

　　練習(xí)

　　1.在我們一生中，我們常常幫助別人并且也從別人那里獲得幫助。

　　_______________________________________________________________

　　2.當(dāng)我們幫助同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)和幫助他們做其他事情的時候，我們不僅產(chǎn)生友誼(develop our friendship)而且還建立(build up)了一個和諧校園

　　_______________________________________________________________

　　3.如果我們幫助老人和病人，我們就能理解快樂的意義。

　　_______________________________________________________________

　　4.我想當(dāng)我們幫助我們周圍的人我們也得到了許多。

　　_______________________________________________________________

　　5.就像那句諺語說的：“給予比得到快樂�！�

　　_______________________________________________________________

　　范例：假設(shè)你是李華。近日，你的英語筆友Jack聽說你們學(xué)校正在開展“建設(shè)節(jié)約型社會(Construction of an energysaving society)”主題活動，發(fā)來郵件請你介紹一下你對活動的看法和建議。請你結(jié)合以下要點，用英語給Jack回復(fù)郵件。高考英語微信公眾號Englishtec.

　　1.不浪費糧食和紙張;2.盡量不使用方便筷、塑料袋;

　　3.畢業(yè)生將書贈給低年級同學(xué)循環(huán)使用;4.其他建議

　　[滿分范文]

　　Dear Jack，

　�、貵lad to receive your email.

　�、贏s you know, there has been an activity of “Construction of an energysaving society” in our school recently. ③I think it is of vital importance because our society is faced with the increasing danger of lack of energy. ④Many reasonable suggestions are given during the activity.

　�、軮n my opinion, there’re many things we can do. ⑥In our daily life, we shouldn’t waste any food or paper. ⑦It is also advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. ⑧Besides, I think the government should make it a rule that used textbooks should not be thrown away when we graduate from school, because most of the books are in good condition and can be recycled.

　　⑨Actually, there are quite a lot that we can easily do, for example, try to take buses or bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. ⑩Only with joint efforts can we help to construct an energysaving society.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

英語寫作指導(dǎo)12

　　報盤

　　Dear Sir，

　　We were very pleased to receive your letter of 5th April answering our advertisement for typewriters and, as requested, enclose a copy of our latest illustrated catalogue and current price list.

　　We think the Portable 95 is a machine that would suit your purpose very well. It weighs 6.5 kg and is a bit heavier than the usual portable, but it is good for heavy duty and at the same time conveniently portable when carried in its case.

　　We have one of these machines in stock and we shall be pleased to arrange for you to try it.

　　Although costs have been rising since March, we have not yet raised our pries, but may have to do so when present stocks run out. We therefore advise you to place your order with us at once.

英語寫作指導(dǎo)13

　　環(huán)境保護

　　大氣污染：關(guān)鍵詞：sulfur dioxide(二氧化硫，一氧化碳)

　　Although substantial progress had been made, sulfur dioxide and monoxide levels were up 25 percent nationally and particulates were increased by more than 14 percent. What is more, pollution levels in a dozen cities were higher than those of 1970. Of 20,000 major stationary sources of air pollution, about 5,000 failed to meet the schedules, and well over half the steel plants and nonferrous smelters in the United States continued to be in violation of federal regulations.

英語寫作指導(dǎo)14

　　（一）書信（Letter）

　　(No.9 the Seventh Street

　　Washington D.C. USA)

　　June 26th, 20xx

　　Dear Cathy,

　　I like your program very much. It has a lot of interesting stories, attractive games and popular English songs. From your program we can learn many new words and expressions. We can improve our listening and speaking in English .We can also

　　know more about the culture of other countries in the world. In a word, we learn a lot from your program.

　　I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t follow you easily sometimes because you speak little bit fast. It’s also a pity that we can only watch your program twice a week.

　　Thank you for giving us a lot of fun! I wish your program a bright future !

　　Yours

　　WangPing

　　(二)電子郵件（e-mail）

　　To: Kayla @hotmail.com

　　Cc: None

　　Subject: Re: Pen-pal wanted

　　Hello, Kayla,

　　I’m Mike. I am 15 years old. I’m glad to know that you would like to have a pen-pal. I also want to find a pen-pal from the Internet. When I’m free, I like to listen to the

　　music, go hiking and play basketball. I’m good at English and art .We can learn from each other and be good friends .I hope to hear from you often.

　　Best wishes.

　　Mike

　　(三)通知

　　Notice

　　Attention, please!

　　This is your monitor, Chen Tao. I have something to tell you. This Friday, April 21st, we shall go to Stone Field Country Park for this year’s spring trip. The

　　park is in the south of Guangzhou. It’s a very beautiful place. We can see many kinks of plants there. We can also have sports games for fun and BBQ meals in the park. But remember that fire can only be allowed in the barbecue places.

　　(四)日記

　　假設(shè)今天是20xx年3月12日，星期天，天晴。請根據(jù)下面通知內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇80個詞左右的日記。參考詞匯：ride, arrive, dig a hole, put , carry water,

　　March 12,20xx, Sunday Fine

　　Today is fine. All our teachers and we students went to plant trees. At 8 in the morning we met outside the school gate. Then we rode our bikes to West Hill. About half past eight, we arrived there. As soon as we got there, some of us dug holes, some put the young trees in the holes, and others carried water and watered the trees. We all worked hard. About 11:30, we left there. Though we were very tired, we felt very happy.

　　(五)賀卡

　　（六）電話留言

　　From: __________ To: __________

　　Date: ___________ Time: ___________

　　Message: _________________________________

　　_______( 記錄人)

　　（七）尋物啟事

　　Lost

　　I lost/left a key with a brown toy monkey on the playground on June

　　26th.Will the finder who found it, please come to Class 1,Grade 3 of No.1 Middle School or call 13988776655.

　　Thank you!

　　Gao Feng

　　（八）失物招領(lǐng)(Found)

　　請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一則英文失物招領(lǐng)：假設(shè)你是市中學(xué)生運動會的`一名志愿者，為運動會服務(wù)。6月8日上午你在體育館（gymnasium）撿到一只手表和一套運動服，請失主打電話與你聯(lián)系。聯(lián)系電話：22843215

　　Found

　　A watch and a suit of sports clothes were found in the gymnasium on the morning of June 8th.Will the owners ring me up? My telephone number is 22843215.

　　（九）請假條

　　假設(shè)你是王剛，請你給外籍教師Mr Brown 寫張請假條。注意請假條格式。內(nèi)容：明天你要到泉州參加運動會，不能跟同學(xué)們一起去植樹，請假一天。

　　Dear Mr Brown,

　　Tomorrow I will go to Quanzhou to take part in a sports meeting, so I can’t plant trees with my classmates. I will have to ask a day off.

　　Thank you.

　　WangGang

　　（十）主題發(fā)言（或演講）

　　Proud of school

　　My school is very big with several tall buildings. There are 20xx students in my school. We have a big playground with lots of trees around it. There are a lot of flowers everywhere

　　We have lots of fun at school. After class we play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and table tennis .Sometimes we have class meetings. They are very interesting.

　　I love my school because it’s like a big family. The teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents. I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.

　　I want to be an inventor. I would like to try out many ideas and make many

　　machines to change the world. If I want to be an inventor, I should have much knowledge. So now, I must study hard, and do many things all by myself.

　　(十一)海報

　　七月四日晚上7：30，九年級一班的同學(xué)將在他們的教室里舉行畢業(yè)晚上。任務(wù)一：請你幫他們設(shè)計一張英文海報（Poster）。

　　A Party

　　Time:7:30 p.m

　　Date: July 4 th

　　Place: Class 1,Grade 9

　　任務(wù)二：假如你是九年級一班的同學(xué)，你能為晚會做些什么呢？（至少兩條）

　　(十二) 便條

　　Note

　　Dear Meimei,

　　I came to your house to return your books. But your were out. I have had to leave the books with Lily. Thank you for lending them to me.

　　By the way, we are going to hold an English party on Saturday evening. Please call me if time doesn’t suit.

　　Wei Fang

英語寫作指導(dǎo)15

　　Unit 1 How can we become good learners？

　　本單元話題為“學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)”，與之相關(guān)的話題作文主要為談?wù)撚⒄Z學(xué)習(xí)方法，這是各地中考英語真題中最�？嫉脑掝}作文之一。寫作時可根據(jù)具體要求或提示，對相關(guān)的學(xué)習(xí)方法提出建議。

　　寫作此類話題作文的常用表達有：

　�。�1）What about listening to…？

　�。�2）Try to guess …by…

　　（3）The more…，the more…

　�。�4）…is the secret to language learning。

　�。�5）I think…should…

　�。�6）It’s a good idea to…

　　【典型例題】

　　為了交流學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率，某初中英語學(xué)習(xí)報正在舉辦以“how to be a good learner”為題的征文比賽，請踴躍投稿。

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　How to be a good learner

　　To be a good learner，we should have good habits and ways of learning。

　　We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class。 After class，we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time。 It’s good to study in groups and help each other。 We should do more reading in our free time。 If we have any problems，we’d better ask others for help。 As a student，working hard is important，but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy。

　　I think all above is helpful to us to be a good learner。

　　Unit2 I think that mooncakes are delicious！

　　本單元是圍繞節(jié)日這一話題展開的，是大家較為熟悉的內(nèi)容，要想寫好這個話題的文章，首先要注意其體裁，通常是電子郵件式的說明文，介紹一兩個中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，內(nèi)容涉及節(jié)日名稱、時間、含義及主要活動，還應(yīng)談到你喜歡該節(jié)日及理由。

　　寫作此類話題作文的常用表達有：

　　（1）I love…because…

　�。�2）I think they are…to…

　　（3）You’ll have good luck in the New Year。

　�。�4）Chinese people have been celebrating…for centuries。

　　【典型例題】

　　假如你是李磊，你的美國筆友Tom對中國傳統(tǒng)文化很感興趣。請你用英語給他寫一封80詞左右的電子郵件。介紹一兩個中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日、如春節(jié)、中秋節(jié)等。

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　Dear Tom

　　I am very glad to tell you something about spring festival。

　　It’s a traditional festival in china。 It comes in winter。

　　It’s time to get new。 We usually clean and decorate our houses carefully before it comes。 I always help my mother clean the windows and wash the clothes。 We put on Chunlian on the doors and chuanghua on the windows。

　　It’s time to say goodbye to the last year，and say hello to the New Year。 Everyone goes home to get together with their families，no matter how far it is。 They must have dinner together on that day。 They must visit their relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them。 When the kids greet their grandparents，they can get money。

　　Unit3 Could you please tell me

　　where the restaurants are？

　　本單元介紹如何指路，也是寫作要涉及的話題。

　　寫作此類話題作文的常用表達有：

　　（1）Let me tall you how to get there。

　　（2）You can walk along......

　�。�3）Turn left/right to......

　　（4）Go straight along......

　　【典型例題】

　　你有兩張紅旗劇院的戲劇票，想要邀請Rob和你一起去看。請你給他寫封信，邀請他并告訴他具體該怎么到達紅旗劇院。

　　【優(yōu)秀作文】

　　Dear Rob，Are you free next Sunday？There will be a concert in Hongqi Theater。 I have two tickets and I hope you can go with me。 Now let me tall you how to get there。

　　First，you can walk along Zhaowuda Road after you leave your home。 Then turn left onto Third Street。 Go straight along Third Street。 When you get to Walking Street，turn right。 Then go along the street until you see Hongqi Theater on your right。

　　I will meet you at the gate of Hongqi Theater。

　　Yours，Liu Ming

　　Unit4 I used to be afraid of the dark。

　　本單元話題為“我們怎樣變化的”，主要圍繞人或事物從過去到現(xiàn)在所發(fā)生的變化展開描述。寫作時首先要理清寫作的邏輯順序，注意過去與現(xiàn)在的對比。在句式的使用上，既可用used to do/be…，but now…，也可以直接用一般過去時描述過去的情況，用一般現(xiàn)在時描寫現(xiàn)在的情況，各種句式交替使用，以免文章顯得呆板。

　　寫作此類話題作文的常用表達有：

　�。�1）…used to do/be

　　（2）How/what about you？

　�。�3）…h(huán)as/have changed a lot in the last few years。

　　【典型例題】

　　請你以Changes in people’s life為題描述最近幾年人們生活上的變化。詞數(shù)80詞左右。

　　提示：

　　1、人們的聯(lián)系方式、娛樂方式的改變

　　2、人們的出行方式及居住環(huán)境的改變

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　Changes in people’s life

　　Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the last few years。

　　In the past people kept in touch with relatives or friends mainly by sending letters。 They would listen to the radio for news and other information。 Children used to go to school by bike。 Big families had to share small rooms。

　　Now people can talk to others by telephone or on the internet at home。 When they are free，they watch the news and other programs on TV。 Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars。 More and more people live in big and bright apartment with several rooms。

　　In a word，people live better than before。

　　Unit5 What are the shirts made of？

　　本單元涉及的.話題是“中國制造的東西”，話題作文通常會涉及民間藝術(shù)以及文化傳承。這是一個適合記敘、說明兩種體裁相結(jié)合的話題，同時也是學(xué)生喜歡寫、有話寫的題材。寫好這類文章，最重要的是準(zhǔn)確捕捉寫作的“精髓”，有條理的把要描述的某一事物展現(xiàn)出來，此類話題的寫作要立足事實、表達真情實感。

　　寫作此類話題作文的常用表達有：

　�。�1）China is famous for…

　　（2）It’s great that China is so good at…

　�。�3）…wish that in the future…will…

　�。�4）These usually try to show…

　�。�5）They are seen as symbols of…

　　【典型例題】

　　假如你是韓梅，遠在美國的筆友Linda給你寫信了，信中，Linda向你了解中國有什么著名小吃。請根據(jù)表格提示給Linda回信。

　　民間小吃：糖葫蘆（tanghulu）

　　原料：山楂（haw），有些地方的糖葫蘆用草莓（strawberry）、葡萄（grape），甚至小蘋果等制成

　　歷史淵源據(jù)說：宋代（the song dynasty）一位皇帝的妻子曾因吃了糖葫蘆治好了病，因此流傳下來象征幸福和團員

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　Dear Linda，You asked me what famous snacks there were in my country。 Well，in my country，one of the most famous snacks is tanghulu。

　　Each different part of China has different tanghulu。 It is usually made of haws，which are put together on a stick and covered with ice sugar。 But there are more materials for tanghulu today in some places，such as strawberries，grapes，and even little apples。

　　It is said that tanghulu ever saved the life of an emperor’s wife in the Song Dynasty。 It was so delicious and healthy that many Chinese people like eating it。 It is now seen as the bright symbols of happiness and reunion。

　　Are you looking forward to eating it？Come to my country，and I’ll treat you to tanghulu。

　　Unit6 When was it invented？

　　本單元的話題是“發(fā)明”，涉及科普知識與技術(shù)等內(nèi)容，是學(xué)生最感興趣的話題之一。寫作體裁多為說明文，寫好這類文章一定要抓住事物的特征、功能和用途。

　　寫作此類話題作文的常用表達有：

　�。�1）When was …invented？

　�。�2）It was invented…

　　（3）They are used for…

　　【典型例題】

　　計算機在我們的生活、工作中的作用越來越大，你知道計算機的起源與發(fā)展嗎？請結(jié)合計算機的發(fā)明時間（1946年）、外形、用途等方面，談一下它的發(fā)展變化，并說明你對未來計算機的暢想。

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　Computer

　　Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life。 Do you know when the computer was invented？

　　The computer was invented in 1946。 At that time，it was huge。 With the development of science and technology，the computer has grown smaller。 Now there are many kinds of computers，such as personal computers and laptops。 The computer is a very useful tool in our life。 For example，it can send some messages to foreign friends by email。 What’s more，it can share information with others through the World Wide Web。 We can also listen to music or play the game on computers。 It makes us relax。

　　It’s hard to imagine what our life would be like without computers。 I think computers will be more convenient and they are going to change our life completely in the near future。

　　Unit7 Teenagers should be allowed

　　to choose their own clothes。

　　本單元以“規(guī)則”為話題，結(jié)合此話題就學(xué)校和家里的規(guī)章制度進行了論述。寫作中常涉及這一話題。寫作時可以發(fā)表自己的觀點，在表達觀點時，要有理有據(jù)，觀點不能偏激。

　　寫作此類話題作文的常用表達有：

　�。�1）I think teenagers should be allowed to …

　�。�2）I agree that…

　　（3）I don’t agree with…

　　【典型例題】

　　國有國法，校有校規(guī)。在你的學(xué)校中一定有很多的規(guī)章制度規(guī)范同學(xué)們的行為。請你寫一篇短文，向大家介紹一兩條校規(guī)或校紀，并談一下自己的看法。

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　There are many rules in our school。

　　At our school we have to wear uniforms every day。 The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly。 I think young people should look smart，so I’d like to wear my own clothes。 If we have to wear uniforms，we should be allowed to design our own uniforms。 That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy。

　　Although we have different views on the rules，I think everyone should obey the school rules。

　　Unit8、 It must belong to Caral。

　　本單元話題為“神秘事物”，圍繞這一話題對我們生活中出現(xiàn)的不確定的事情進行推理判斷。要求我們恰當(dāng)使用情態(tài)動詞客觀的對提供的材料進行分析，以推測某件物品可能是某人的或某人正在做什么。寫作此類話題作文的常用表達有：

　　（1）sth.must /can’t/might/could be......

　�。�2）sb. must/can’t/might/could be doing…

　　【典型例題】

　　你在上學(xué)的路上撿到了一件T—shirt，它是你校某位同學(xué)的。請根據(jù)以下提示做出一個合理的推斷，并把推斷的經(jīng)過和結(jié)果寫出來�？蛇m當(dāng)發(fā)揮，詞數(shù)80詞左右。

　　提示：

　　1、 Mary和Sally的T恤衫都丟了

　　2、T恤衫上有長頭發(fā)

　　3、T恤衫口袋里有一張信用卡和一張劉德華的照片

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　Oh，look！There is a T—shirt here。 It’s a school T—shirt。 The owner must be a student。

　　Mary and sally lost their T—shirt。 Could it be Mary’s or Sally’s？There is long hair on the T—shirt。 But both of them have long hair。 There is a photo of Liu Dehua in the pocket。 Sally likes Liu Dehua very much，but Mary’s favorite star is Sun Yanzi。 So，it belongs to sally。 There is credit card too。 Then，it must be sally’s school T—shirt because she is the only person who has a credit card in our school。

　　Unit9、 I like music that I can dance to。

　　【典型例題】

　　假如你叫李明，是一名中學(xué)生，經(jīng)常收聽由美國主持人Philip主持的音樂節(jié)目，請根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點提示，用英語給主持人寫一封信。

　　要點：

　　1、你很喜歡這個節(jié)目，特別是節(jié)目播放的歌詞很優(yōu)美，是很棒的英語歌曲。

　　2、在你學(xué)習(xí)感到疲勞時，會打開收音機聽這個節(jié)目。

　　3、從節(jié)目中你學(xué)到了很多單詞。

　　4、告訴他你最喜歡的是什么類型的音樂，請他幫助你介紹一些相關(guān)的歌手和CD。

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　Dear Philip，My name is Li Ming。 I am a middle school student。 I often Listen to your program at night。 I like it very much，especilly the English songs。

　　I like the English songs that have great lyrics。 Every night，I will turn on the radio and listen to your program when I feel tired。 It helps me relax myself。 By the way，I have learnt many English words from these songs。

　　At last，I like singers who can sing clearly and write their own songs。 Can you introduce me some singers and their CDs？You can send me e—mail at Liming@yahoo.com。

　　I am looking forward to hearing you。 Thank you very much！

　　Yours

　　Li Ming

　　Unit10。 You are supposed to shake hands。

　　本單元以“風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣”為話題，圍繞這一話題主要學(xué)習(xí)各國的不同禮儀，如見面禮儀、餐桌禮儀等，談?wù)撛诓煌膱龊蠎?yīng)該做什么，了解不同國家的習(xí)俗。最能體現(xiàn)本單元話題以及語言運用能力的作文為介紹不同國家風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣的短文、書信或郵件等。寫作此類話題作文的常用表達有：

　�。�1）You are supposed/expected to…

　�。�2）You should…

　　（3）You are not supposed to…

　　【典型例題】

　　假如你是蘇敏，你的美國筆友Tina發(fā)來電子郵件，說她下周要來中國，但對中國的風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣、見面禮儀及餐桌禮儀了解很少，于是向你尋求幫助，請你給她回一封電子郵件，告訴她有關(guān)中國風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣、見面禮儀及餐桌禮儀的情況。

　　提示：

　　1、風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣的不同：中國人第一次見面時握手；

　　2、見面時談?wù)摰膬?nèi)容；

　　3、餐桌禮儀的不同：我們用筷子就餐；就餐時不能用筷子指著別人；就餐時不可以多說話等。

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　Dear Tina，I’m very happy to hear that you’re coming to china next week。 I hope to see you soon。

　　As we all know，different countries have different customs。 So the manners in China are very different from those in your country。 Let me tell you something about customs and manners in our country。

　　First，we Chinese are supposed to shake hands when we meet for the first time。 Then we greet each other。 After that，you can talk about something relaxing。 But you are not supposed to talk about someone’s salary，age and so on。 Second，we use chopsticks to have meals while you use your forks at table。 Also，it’s bad manners to talk too much when you’re having meals。

　　I hope you’ll have a wonderful time in our country。

　　Unit11、Sad movies make me cry。

　　本單元主要談?wù)撃臣虑閷ξ覀兊挠绊懸约拔覀兊母惺�，這是一個記敘和議論相結(jié)合的話題。寫這類話題的文章，觀點要明確，并給出具體事例，最后適當(dāng)加以評論。

　　【典型例題】

　　每個人都有幸運和不幸的時候，在你的記憶中，你所經(jīng)歷的最糟糕的一天是什么樣的？寫出你的經(jīng)歷過程和感受。要求語句通順，語法正確，不少于80詞。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　I still remember the bad day I have experienced clearly。

　　It was a Friday。 I woke up late because my clock didn"t go off。 I felt very nervous。 I might be late for school。 When I got to school，the teacher was having a class。 I felt afraid。 As a result，the teacher punished me。 I was very sad。 By the time we had English class，I found I had left my English book at home。 So I had to borrow one。

　　After lunch，I fought with my classmate because of some small things。The teacher kicked me off the classroom and sent me home。 I knew I let my parents down。 I also felt I wasn"t a good child。 I didn"t feel like eating dinner and went to bed。

　　That night I thought about these things carefully and decided to make a change。 I believed I could be a good boy soon。

　　Unit12。、Life is full of the unexpected。

　　【典型例題】

　　假如你是Tom，請記述你昨天不同尋常的一天：

　　1、鬧鐘沒響，所以起床晚了；

　　2、想洗澡時，爸爸已經(jīng)在洗澡了；

　　3、沒吃早餐去趕公交，可到達公交站時車已經(jīng)走了，只好跑到學(xué)校去；4。到達學(xué)校時，老師已經(jīng)開始上課，對你的遲到感到很生氣；5。交作業(yè)時發(fā)現(xiàn)作業(yè)放在家里了；6。歷史課上受到老師的表揚，因為在家做了大量的準(zhǔn)備工作。

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　Yesterday was a really bad day for me。

　　To start with，my alarm clock didn’t go off so that I got up late。 By the time I got up，my father had already gotten into the shower。 Then I rushed to the bus stop without breakfast。 By the time I got there，the bus had already left and I had to rushed to school。 When I got to school，my teacher had already started teaching and he was really angry with me。 Then it was time to hand in homework，but I had left it at home。 I was really embarrassed at that time。

　　One good thing was that my history teacher said something good to me because I had done a lot to prepare for this class。 It was the only good thing for me yesterday。

　　Unit13、 We"re trying to save the earth！

　　【典型例題】

　　假如你所在的城市正在創(chuàng)建“國家級衛(wèi)生城市”，作為該城市的一員，你會有許多感觸和想法。請以“How to set up a national healthy city？”為題，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇80—100個單詞的英語短文。

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　How to set up a national healthy city？

　　Our city is trying to set up a national healthy city。 As a member of the city，I think we should obey the rules。

　　We can’t throw rubbish here and there。 We can’t talk loudly in public，such as in the library or in the museum。 We can’t spit and smoke in public as well。 When we are on the bus，we should give our seats to the old and children，as well as some women with babies in their arms。

　　During our daily lives，we should be polite to others。 And we should obey the traffic rules。 Remember to stop when the traffic light is red。 We must go across the road when the traffic light is green。 Finally，we should also turn off the lights before we leave the room。

　　I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful as long as we all try our best to do something for it！

　　Unit14、 I remember meeting all of you in Grade7。

　　【典型例題】

　　初中三年即將結(jié)束，請寫一篇英語短文介紹你難忘的一個人或一件事。

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　A person I will never forget

　　The person I will never forget is my English teacher。

　　He is a tall man with glasses。 He likes sports and often plays football with us in his free time。 He is very humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting。 He is kind but strict with us。 He never allows us to make careless mistakes when we have an exam and always encourage us to study hard and be good at English。 He often tells us it is useless to memorize news words without understanding。

　　My English has greatly improved with his help。

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